Your Comments Please?

I am working on ICI paints as a class assignment. and I need your comments that i could improve my work.

there are three parts of my assignment

1. Hoarding

2. Poster

3. Newspaper Ad

http://i31.tinypic.com/xqmj2s.jpg

http://i30.tinypic.com/2cesnk0.jpg

http://i27.tinypic.com/2sa01g4.jpg

Also tell me straitly about my work

bad, avarage, or good

Your Comments Please?

Hi,

Excellent work mate. The way you've used the colours and your simple and effective approach for conveying the message is very impressive. Though your work is quite artistic it still is easy to understand for the common man. The only thing I am unsure about is your first design (the hoarding). It is not bad but gives me a feel of emptiness. I am not an artist so I'm not sure how this can be improved but there is certainly some room for improvement. Your 3rd design is very good and I can't spot a problem with. The 2nd one however is perfect in my opinion.

Best of luck in your studies and keep up the good work.

Your Comments Please?

those are yours?damn, i like em a lot. simple but effective.

Your Comments Please?

I think they are all really good. My favorite would have to be your poster... its very creative, and i love it. Im not so sure about the first one, but i think you should definately get a good grade with these, im just not so much interested with the 1st. the other 2 are pretty interesting!

Good luck with your assignment!

Your Comments Please?

wow

those are awesome

i love how you got your point across but didnt have the viewers eyes constantly looking to see wat you are trying to get across to people...basically i love them

i wouldnt change them at all

Your Comments Please?

i love all of them! really goood :]

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I really like the poster. But all of them are good. I like the colors a lot :)

Great work

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I LOVE THEM!! They are VERY good for someone, actually, FOR ANYONE! I would give ou a A+! You are doing absolutely fantastic! Keep On Moving!- I mean TRUCKIN!

Your Comments Please?

your posters are great, good vibrant use of color to draw the eye and the angle you use in the second one is a good angle to use as if the person looking at it is actually there and the first and second are simple but very effective

i like them alot